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First I want to say, overall, great job! This picture looks wonderful, and is one of the subjects that I really enjoy, that being super...


I love this picture. As a big fan of the contrast of heroine with villain pairings, it is right up my ally. Both Powergirl and Doomsday...

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First I want to say, overall, great job! This picture looks wonderful, and is one of the subjects that I really enjoy, that being super heroines being paired with villains.

First, the positives:

Powergirl looks amazing. You did an even better job with her this time around than on your last Powergirl with Doomsday picture. Her boobs are much more 'Powergirl-sized' in this picture, too. So it is more on-model, which I like. I like when characters are drawn closer to on-model, like here. For instance, if someone drew Kitty Pride with huge, Powergirl-sized boobs, I would NOT like that, because it doesn't look like the character. I think you really captured Powergirl's 'look' in this picture.

The colors are really, really good. Well done on that.

Doomsday's arms, hands, and bone-stuctures are really well done.

Now for the negatives:

Powergirl's neck is to long.

Doomsday's head is to small. His body is also to small, but his head is really small.

About the scenario, which I really do love, but I don't understand the need for her to have on Kryptonite shackles. Doomsday is a powerful enough villain to just be able to over-power her, so it may have been fun to have her arms be free, trying to struggle against him, but failing. If you had paired her with a physically less-powerful villain, then I think that the Kryptonite would have made sense. This isn't a criticism of the art, but the scenario.

Based on the picture at your blog:

It kind of looks like Doomday's dick is growing out of the side of his leg.

Also, and this is just regarding my personal tastes, I would have liked it if Powergirl had had a small triangular patch of pubic hair right above her pussy, pointing down to it. Not a huge bush, but a tidy one. Though I know a lot of people like the fully bald look.

Okay, overall, the picture is really great. I love the drawing, the coloring, and the subject. Think it is even better than your last Powergirl with Doomsday drawing, and I really liked that last one, too.

I really hope you do more art based around heroine with villain pairings.

Thank you for posting this picture for us to enjoy.
I love this picture. As a big fan of the contrast of heroine with villain pairings, it is right up my ally.

Both Powergirl and Doomsday look great! The detail is wonderful, from Doomsday's bones, to Powergirl's torn costume, to the embers of the fire in the air. I like how Doomsday is holding Powergirl aloft, with one of his large hands gripping the bottom and sides of both of Powergirl's beautiful breasts, and with his other he is grasping her sharply ass. I like the slight turn of her hips from her slender waist, with how Doomsday's hands are pulling her helplessly towards him.

The only improvement I think would be if the artist had made her boobs just a bit bigger. I am NOT saying that because I am one of those guys that wants to slap huge boobs on every drawing of fantasy women, but because I really like it when artists try to stay on-model when drawing erotic art of those characters. Powergirl does have large boobs as part of her character design, so it would be on-model to make them just a little bit bigger. They still look really nice here, though.

Overall, really wonderful job. Thanks are due to the artist and commissioner for creating this picture!

A picture such as this deserves a follow-up! Hopefully the artist will make another, showing Doomsday fully fucking and owning Powergirl.

Great job!

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